Opposite

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Black and white
Dark and light
Do they attract
As part of a pact

Right and Wrong
Big and Small
Is it correct
To have this effect

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4 thoughts on “Opposite

    NorthernSole said:
    November 13, 2010 at 10:30 am

    seven or eight,
    nine or ten,
    was this poem
    written by children?

    Ed responded:
    November 14, 2010 at 3:20 pm

    Thanks for your poem in response to mine. No the author is a world renown wordsmith- you may feel you would benifit from lessons but this is a good attempt. Do you do joined up writing ?

    NorthernSole said:
    November 14, 2010 at 6:52 pm

    three angry bears
    or Goldilocks
    i think your excuse
    is a load of bollocks!

    not world renowned
    nor a famous poet
    you’re talking rubbish
    and we all know it

    it’s time to give up
    this ridiculous game
    we all know your words
    are totally lame

    Ed responded:
    November 15, 2010 at 9:09 pm

    thanks your getting better – like the way it rhymes -youre starting to read the signs . Oh i’m at it now

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